Property listing description
Use this when you are writing particulars or listing remarks from a fact sheet the vendor has seen. It puts the decision-changing facts before the adjectives.
When to use it
- A new instruction is ready for the brochure and the portal.
- You are rewriting a draft that has plenty of atmosphere and not enough tenure, price or room facts.
- A price or a material fact has changed and the whole description needs to match.
How to adapt it
- Copy the template into a draft, not into a live send.
- Replace every bracket with a fact from the file. If you do not have the fact, delete the sentence.
- Read it once as the client. Take out anything you would not say on the phone.
- Send it only after a person has approved the final text, from the right account.
Copy this draft
[Property type] for sale in [area], [asking price / guide price / offers over] [figure]. [One sentence a stranger can picture: what the home is, and the single feature that is actually the reason to view.] Downstairs: [rooms, in the order a viewer walks them, with only the sizes or features on the fact sheet]. Upstairs: [bedrooms and bathrooms, again only what you have]. Outside: [garden, parking, garage — or say there is no parking if that is the fact]. Tenure: [freehold / leasehold with X years remaining]. [Ground rent and service charge, with the year those figures refer to, or delete.] Council tax band [band]. EPC [rating]. [If a fact would change an offer — short lease, managed building, known restriction the vendor has told you — put it here in plain words.] Viewing by appointment with [branch].
Before you send it
- For a let, swap tenure for the rent, deposit, whether bills are included, and the type of let you are actually offering. Do not promise a fixed term the current rules do not give.
- For US remarks, use list price, beds/baths, lot and HOA dues if they apply. Follow that MLS’s length and fair-housing rules. Do not call it particulars.
- Delete any line you cannot source. “Character” is not a substitute for a missing room.
Questions
Can I leave the brackets in for the vendor to fill?
Yes. A draft with visible gaps is safer than a finished paragraph that invented the gap.
Where does the price sit?
In the first line, in the form the vendor agreed: asking price, guide, or offers over.